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Comments are working again. Thanks for the head's up, Kathy.

UPDATE: Wait, is it "head's up" or "heads up?" Or maybe "headsup?" Anyway, it's an important phrase -- if you're writing a poem and you need a word to rhyme with "catsup," it's about as close as you're going to get.

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not if you call it ketchup :)

I understand that it is a command to be alert given to multiple people. The 'up' isn't owned and the heads aren't 'being' to invoke the contraction with 'is'.

So

Heads up!

On top of a tower with catsup
I fumbled the bottle and yelled

"Heads up!"

My cry was ignored
and the crowd it was floored

When the Porche that I hit was messed up.


Okay, okay, not so good. But YOU try finding something better that rhymes with catsup and "heads up."

The rhyming is fine, but for some reason, I think the car should be a Volvo. Or maybe a Saab.

(This is the kind of useful commentary that people give in creative writing workshops.)

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